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my work is real : peotry

Sat Oct 8, 2005, 6:26 AM
why doesnt anything ever turn out like i hope
and why are so many people against my art work and think its all a fraud and not actually done by me when it is everyone in my school sees me do that but what i dont get is that the people on this site dont think it came from my head but instead a book which is bullshit
you know what i say let them believe what they like for a master piece is what i am
if they cant understand my peotry then they have so much too learn for peotry is what we feel and eithercomes from theheart or is randomly made up in a stupid way and when readit makes good perfect sense

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:iconandrewsgal121604:
people on d.a. are assholes not to believe your work is real.
You're a great poet and I know it!
Keep up the good work.
BTW got to [link] and you have a change to get them submitted into a book. ^.^ my mom did.
YOU KICK ASS!!

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I was told that red heads do it better. ;-)
So what do you think?
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:iconthehalfdead:
yo brah dont give a f.. bout em forget em u know its real
u wirte out of love or for reconggnition (both is fine)

my point is what do u care if they anit good enogh let em cry
why should u give a crap
:icondaedalic:
o... just passed by. weird something like that never happened to me... (yet?) ah well cheer up. people are just jealous when they say that ^^; i think i've gotten used to that when i was small... *sigh*

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I am the biting chipmunk. Fear me, mortal!
:iconwolfhowler:
i guess your right but have taken the cheance to read my workif so id like your comments on it

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Your past is who you are,
Your future is what you become,
Now is what you do,
You have one life to live,
Make it memorable for others!
:iconnekobear54:
Why I wonder people go down and wonder if they have a place in life, I nod my head and look around. A poem I came up with a long time ago:

"The way life gets when I try and be as I am, no one seems to get me.
I am always there cheering for you on the side lines, you seem to hear your name but don’t realize what it all means.
Try and explain it just comes as a mumble, the words are there in my head but on paper it wouldn’t mean a thing.
Why does this bother me?
Why do I spend all my time waiting for you?
Is it because, I care or I can?
You decide, Its all a blur and fuzzy.
When your there it’s clear and perfect, thanks for your kindness and loving heart but do I mean a thing to you..."

A poem I made for someone who I thought was close to me...But I have made up my mind. Choose your loved ones carefully. ^-^

-Neko

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You say you love me, then why do you always leave?
:iconwolfhowler:
you should post this as a poem
do you know how?

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Your past is who you are,
Your future is what you become,
Now is what you do,
You have one life to live,
Make it memorable for others!
:iconnekobear54:
No >.<;

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You say you love me, then why do you always leave?
:iconwolfhowler:
why not?

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Your past is who you are,
Your future is what you become,
Now is what you do,
You have one life to live,
Make it memorable for others!
:iconnekobear54:
Because I don't know how?

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You say you love me, then why do you always leave?

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